I found that sometimes working in the single-panel format compromised the dialogue delivery, because I was allowed only one facial expression to sum everything up.
I think this is one of those instances because the conversation between these two is like a roller coaster of tone, volume, and expression… and I don’t think their singular expression contains it.
But god, living in the dorms you can get some real crap living situations. Best I had was the guy who was obsessed with serial killers. A very tense semester.
I read this one so that the picture shown is the picture at both the beginning and the ending of the dialogue, while most of the middle is very different.
I think that’s what I was trying for Toby, exactly. :)