Here we get back to editorial comments (or, in this case, proofreading comments). The point being that someone saying “that’s nice” is not helpful, because EVERY piece of writing can be improved upon.
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I would argue that this really is more of an editorial issue rather than a proofreading issue. Proofreading is more about layout and adhering to a design standard. This is more like line editing – looking through the text and making the flow smoother (and yeah, if I saw a heap of semicolons everywhere, I’d probably break a few into separate sentences).